Kids cool character writing

The Grumpy Old Man

The grumpy old man was 77 years old. His skin was wrinkly. He had three grandchildren they were noisy little kids! The grumpy old man has a special picture of his wife. - Aeran
The grumpy old man had green snot coming out of his bent and crooked nose. The grumpy old man had dry wrinkles under his eyes, with skin peeling off. He had Mosquitos bites everywhere on his bald head. He has a ripped tuxedo with patches-Priya
He has a frowned wrinkly face and eyebrows that were facing the ground. His skin was as pale as a cruel vampire. His cloths were a black suit like you would wear to a wedding or to a funeral. He wore a tie that when you looked at it you could only think of death.
The old man smelt like a year of compost. He had a couple of big fat bold moles on his cheeks. The moles each had one white hair growing out of it. He lived in a plain old smelly cardboard box. He wore ripped up stinky rotten jeans and white singlet with brown coffee stains on it. Every time little kids walked past he shouted out “Leave my box alone”. - Anthony
Old man with a scrunched up face! He has a white wispy hair with a big red nose! The Grumpy old man always has dirty eyes with wrinkles beside his evil eyes! He has a dark voice like a lion roaring towards his grandchild- Kei
The grumpy old hag has grey stubby gruesome hair. He had ready pink skin, all wrinkled up. He has a ugly top hat with a tie that makes people feel sick and a black tuxedo which smell of aftershave and deodorant –Burty
The grumpy old man smells like aftershave. His hair is rough and stubby. His chest is covered in hairs. His skin is like rubber. He wears smart old clothes. He lives on Rutherford Street Nelson in an old wooden cottage on the other side of the road from my house. I often here him shouting at his grandchildren. His age is 88 and by the way his cottage has peeling paint all over. -Huw
The old man is a dangerous old man. He would be yelling so much that it’s starting to crack the windows just because one kid did something wrong. He acts like he’s 100 years old! He’s stinky, he’s grumpy what else could there be?-Logan
A grumpy old man
A grumpy old man with a smelly body. A grumpy old man with wrinkly skin. A grumpy old man with rich old clothes with a yellow hat -Trey

His skin was stinky and wrinkly he was half bold with hair around his ears, but he stunk the place out.-Chantelle
The grumpy old man with the skin that felt like tattered old bark. His eyes were like a blaze of fire. He was very posh with a black, like night tux. His hair was like a prickly hedgehog.-Levi
The grumpy flabby wrinkly old man was very mad because his dog was barking very loud.-Gabe

A lonely child.

His thick caramel brown hair shining silkily against the warm sun. His skin the colour of fresh milk. A salty tear slipped down one of his pale cheeks and on to one of his black leather shoes. He clasped his hands tightly around his head. He looked up at me as if asking me for something. His eyes the size of saucers a deep emerald green. I will help you I whispered that’s what I’ll do. –Georgie

The child looked up at me with a cry for help. His skin as pale as newly layered white snow. His eyes sparkled with tears as they filled his eyes like a new bottle of sparkling water. A tear trickled down his soft pale skin onto his scabby foot. He lifted his head, his eyes a pretty sea blue. He looked so very desperate yet they were as big as a table. His clothes, well you could tell nobody loved him. He reached out to me with a sore well broken hand. As I touched his hand for a quick second I could feel his pain, cold and sore I was going to die, then it stopped and he vanished with me replacing him sad, scabby, alone, and tired now I’m the lonely child -Madison

The poor lonely child looked up at the dark gloomy grey sky as a large blue tear slowly dribbled down her rosy red cheek as the moon shined over her.-Izzy
The nasty boy stood with a disgusting grin (he doesn’t brush his teeth) while a nice tourist walked closer and closer then he put his silky , hairy and wrinkly leg out.-Josh


Dark brown silky hair that swept down onto his lovely white face which lead to a white checkered top with a bow tie.-Todd

A person having fun at the park

She had emerald green eyes, lovely golden brown hair and puffy pink cheeks. She was wearing a white dress with little purple lilies on it and bright green tights on with lace on the bottom. She was in the brand new playground across the quiet street. On the brand new swing set.-Lucy


They would run around picking lovely flowers that smelt like perfume .They would have a colourful dress that would flow in the wind. When they go over to the swing that is hanging in the light pink blossom tree, they swing as high as a bird .They are giggling like a Kookaburra and having the time of their life! –Amelia

The girl at the park is playing with her friends. They are playing and they are very happy going down the slide and going up the climbing wall. They are having fun together.-Lee

A little girl was having fun in the park had little blonde pig tails and had a long pretty pink dress with a sparkly butterfly on it. She had lips as red as roses and her skin were white and soft. She was a happy caring girl that loved to play in the long fresh grass as she ran through the grass her blonde pig tails flowed in the wind and her dress span round we she went round and round in circles.-Xanthe